Authors Note: This essay is going to be about what it would be like if the climax of a boy trying to steal a woman's purse never happened.
In the story, Thank you Ma'am, a boy tried stealing a middle aged woman's purse, which was filled with everything you could think of and more. If the boy wouldn't of tried stealing the woman's purse for some money for cool blue suede shoes, he wouldn't have been kicked in the butt and shook till his teeth rattled. Also the boy wouldn't have been scared out of his mind by the woman who resembled Queen Latifa, who he thought would be scared of him but she wasn't. The boy for once in his life had a friend, a person who fed him, and a person who even washed his face and cleaned him up. This care and friendship would have never formed if the boy didn’t try to steal that woman's purse for those cool suede blue shoes.If this never happened he would have never got those cool blue suede shoes and unexpectedly a friendship.
Just think the boy was planning on just stealing the purse easily and running away with it. He thought this poor old lady would probably just scream help while running away. He would never think that the lady's purse would be so heavy and he'd fall on his butt, that was defiantly not part of the plan.Even though what he thought of what was a good plan to steal a poor womans purse.
I think your piece of thank you Ma'am is really good i wanted to keep reading it. I think you could have made it a little longer but it was still good. I think the hole thing was really good
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