Starting Introductions

Question Intro:
Example: Have you ever wondered what it would be like to visit one of the 7 wonders of the world?
Thesis: The Grand Canyon of Americas West is most defiantly the greatest wonder of all.
My question Intro:
Example: Does Santa clause cause parents to spend more?
Thesis: Santa Clause existence makes children have more presents everywhere
Startling Statement:
Example: In America today 1 out of 4 women are diagnosed with acid reflex.
Thesis: Due to technology available from doctors today, women can live long and comfortable lives, free of acid reflex complications.
My Example:
Within the United States millions of kids die each year from the harmful causes of Cancer.
Thesis:
Even though many children die also many survive because of the many scientists who find cures.
Narrative:
Example:
On a small South Pacific island virtually unknown to most people, lies the one of the most notable beaches. The deep, black sands engulfed hundreds of bodies as soldiers attempted to reach the inner island strong holds.
Thesis:
Of all the battles fought in the, “great war”, Iwojima is the most devastating.
My Example:
In the small state of Arizona withholds a natural wonders that took millions of years to form and is still forming today. Hundreds of feet under sea level

Of all wonders of the world the Grand Canyon is the most marvelous.